BRICKS
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I think your part about "learning for life" stands out to me the most. You are also correct that forums are, in part, a place for continued education.
In the spirit of continuing to learn I offer the following critique of your post, which I have quoted above for reference.
Your post is missing 21 commas and has 2 misplaced commas. Your post is also missing 4 periods and has 2 incomplete sentences. You uneccesarily used the word "that" on 4 occasions. Additionally, your final sentence is written in the past tense which is considered unacceptable in most academic settings.
In conclusion: saw*, have*, now*, there are*, posts*, have*, they're*, forums*, were*, until*, forum*, have*.
I hope you can take what you learned here today and apply it to future posts.
Edit: Looks like Bricks beat me to it while I was typing this out.
Yes but I applaud your tenacity and effort. It had to be painful. I got a fkn headache trying to read what he posted.